First Draft Script

Here is the first draft script for my Lynch film - so far it doesn't have a name. I decided to combine the elements of all the films I looked at, whilst trying to keep it short and simple. I decided on three characters - the cute blonde and the seductive brunette, as well the the well-dressed authoritative male. Using Blue Velvet's noir style, I made the male a gang leader, trying to convince his sister, the blonde, to join him. Eventually he gets shot. Using inspiration from Mulholland Drive, I decided to make the two female characters have a lesbian kiss scene at the end. The whole conversation is quite nonsensical as the viewer doesn't know who the characters are talking about (Robert), until it is revealed that the male himself is Robert, much alike to the reveal of true characters in Mulholland Drive. Like Rabbits, the three characters are all sat in a room much like a sitcom set-up, as I thought this would be easy to replicate. Also like in Rabbits, some of the dialogue is in a different order, such as 'what colour is the blood' and 'the blood is red'. I have included this as part of a conversation on the telephone, as the telephone is iconic in most of Lynch's films.